There’s a real sense of clarity about your hypothesis and where your argument is directed.
The area to work on is to ensure you don’t shift too far in the direction of persuasive writing – there is a place in the introduction phase to use rhetorical devices – but now you are moving in the direction of the analysis, try to keep your style as formal (and un-emotive) as possible.
Do check out my exemplar on the class site to get an idea of how that might look you think it might help.
There’s a real sense of clarity about your hypothesis and where your argument is directed.
The area to work on is to ensure you don’t shift too far in the direction of persuasive writing – there is a place in the introduction phase to use rhetorical devices – but now you are moving in the direction of the analysis, try to keep your style as formal (and un-emotive) as possible.
Do check out my exemplar on the class site to get an idea of how that might look you think it might help.
CW
This is so good Mia!